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Chapter 1 – Ten Minutes Until Goodbye

Chapter 1 – Ten Minutes Until Goodbye

The prison visitation room was so cold that even silence felt made of steel.

Faded beige walls carried decades of forgotten grief. A flickering fluorescent light buzzed overhead, while a scratched gray table divided the condemned from the people who still believed there was something worth saving.

In the corner, Correctional Officer Grant checked his watch for the third time in less than a minute.

Ten minutes.

That was all the State had granted.

The heavy steel door clanged open.

Ana Morales stepped inside wearing an orange prison uniform, her wrists restrained by handcuffs. At thirty-four, she should have looked young.

Instead, she looked like someone who had spent three years dying one day at a time.

Tomorrow morning at 6:00 a.m., the State of Illinois would execute her for murdering her husband, Thomas Morales.

The evidence had seemed overwhelming.

The murder weapon had been recovered from her kitchen drawer.

Her fingerprints were found on the knife.

A neighbor testified they heard Ana screaming, "I wish you were dead!" only minutes before Thomas was stabbed.

Every newspaper called her The Jealous Wife Killer.

Every television station replayed the same courtroom footage.

Every appeal had failed.

Every judge had reached the same conclusion.

Guilty.

Only one person had never stopped believing her.

Her seven-year-old daughter.

The second door opened.

"Mom!"

Lucia burst into the room before anyone could stop her.

She wore a gray T-shirt, denim shorts, and worn-out sneakers. Blonde hair framed a face that looked far too young to understand words like execution, death warrant, or final appeal.

Officer Grant instinctively stepped forward.

"No physical contact."

Attorney Elena Vega quickly turned to him.

"Please."

Grant hesitated.

Then he looked at the child.

"...Thirty seconds."

Lucia didn't wait.

She threw herself into her mother's arms.

Ana collapsed against her, the handcuffs clinking loudly as she wrapped her daughter in the tightest embrace she could manage.

She buried her face in Lucia's hair.

"I've missed you so much."

"I missed you more."

Ana smiled through tears.

"I wanted you to remember me smiling."

"You don't have to say goodbye."

Those words pierced deeper than any sentence the judge had ever pronounced.

Ana gently cupped Lucia's face.

"My brave girl..."

"No."

Lucia shook her head fiercely.

"You're coming home."

Across the table, Attorney Vega quietly looked away.

She had spent eighteen years defending criminal cases.

She knew hope could be beautiful.

She also knew hope could be cruel.

The governor had already denied clemency.

The execution order had already been signed.

There was nothing left.

Or so everyone believed.

Ana brushed a loose strand of hair behind Lucia's ear.

"Listen to me carefully."

Lucia refused.

"I don't want to."

"You have to."

Her voice cracked.

"I need you to grow up kind."

"I need you to go to school."

"I need you to laugh again."

"And whenever you think of me..."

Lucia interrupted.

"I know you didn't kill Daddy."

Silence.

Even Officer Grant stopped checking his watch.

Ana closed her eyes.

She had heard those words hundreds of times.

But today...

Today they felt unbearable.

"My love..."

"It's okay."

"No." Lucia grabbed both of her mother's hands. "It's not."

Ana forced herself to stay calm.

"Sometimes innocent people lose."

Lucia's tiny face hardened with surprising determination.

"Not this time."

Vega finally looked up.

Something about the child's voice felt different.

Not hopeful.

Certain.

Ana kissed Lucia's forehead.

"It's too late now."

Lucia lowered her eyes.

Then she whispered almost too softly to hear.

"No..."

"It isn't."

Ana frowned.

"What do you mean?"

Lucia glanced toward the security camera mounted high in the corner.

Then toward Officer Grant.

Then toward the thick steel door.

As though someone might be listening.

She leaned closer until her lips were almost touching her mother's ear.

"I never told anyone..."

Ana felt her heartbeat slow.

"...because she said you'd die if I did."

Every muscle in Vega's body tensed.

"Lucia..."

The little girl swallowed hard.

Her hands trembled.

"I saw someone the night Daddy died."

Ana's breathing stopped.

"What...?"

Lucia's eyes filled with tears.

"I wasn't asleep."

"I heard shouting."

"So I went downstairs."

The room had become unnaturally still.

Even Officer Grant unconsciously took one step closer.

Lucia's voice broke.

"I saw Aunt Marta."

Ana stared at her daughter.

Blank.

Unable to process the words.

"She was standing in the kitchen..."

Lucia continued.

"...and her hands were covered in blood."

Vega's chair scraped violently across the floor as she stood.

"What did you say?"

Lucia flinched.

"I saw her hide the knife."

Ana's face drained of every trace of color.

"No..."

"She saw me."

Lucia burst into tears.

"She told me if I ever told anyone..."

"...Mommy would die because of me."

Silence crashed over the room.

Officer Grant slowly reached for the radio on his belt.

Attorney Vega didn't blink.

She didn't breathe.

She only stared at the child.

Because after three years...

After dozens of failed appeals...

After every door had been slammed shut...

A seven-year-old girl had just opened one.

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And none of them realized...

Her confession was only the first layer of a mystery far darker than anyone had imagined.

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